I’m looking for people to review my comic story and script, before I proceed with the art and final draft too much.
I have two Google Document, one with the story/plan (including characer information as well), and one with the script/final draft.
I do not want to give out the links to the documents to the whole forum, so if you are interested, please message me privately, and I will send you the link or preferrably invite you through email.
With the story plan, I am looking for critique and feedback:
Is the plot interesting?
Does the plot feel unique?
Are the characters interesting?
With the final draft script, I have finished the first issue, which is quite long compared to the others, and am partly through the second issue. I recommend reading the first sixteen pages which I have already drawn, so you have a better idea of how the story and pacing is translated into images.
Is the pacing of the writing well done?
Is the dialogue too cheesy/serious e.t.c.
Does the story and the writing style interest you?
I am looking to others for critique, because when one writes their own story, they are usually too familiarized with it to critique it properly.