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Need critique on B&W / screentone artwork + tips!


Hi guys, I would love some feedback on a 90% art finished page from my upcoming graphic novel The Murder Club. I picked out a page to do as a test page, as I haven’t done a B&W ink/tone comic before.
Ideally if anyone has any tips/tricks on doing screentone work (I’m using Manga Studio 4EX fyi) that would be great.I’d like to speed my work up a bit you see - that page took 16 hours from ‘blue pencil’ rough to this stage. I know I’ll get quicker the more I do, but at this rate it will take me over a year to do all 116 pages!
Cheers :slight_smile: