I read part 1 on Comichaus and really enjoyed it. Kudos to you.
With regards to the Kickstarter, I’m probably not the best to judge as I don’t really know what works in terms of rewards but I do like the no nonsense options you have available. They’re all ‘pay ya money and this is what ya get’ type rewards and I really like that compared to others that just offer bits of extra crap and shit (although crap and shit may work as well) that will probably just go in the bin.
Not too sure about the last reward. Seems very unlikely to happen and kind of takes away from the other rewards. A bit like: what’s the point in trying to help this guy make a comic by picking a smaller reward when someone could just ride in and do it all.
Hope this helps, good luck with the project.