I’m currently working on an employees annual evaluation, and I have one HELL of a run on sentence that I cannot seem to get correct. Since y’all are some of the most intelligent people I “know”, I’m seeking your help with this one particular sentence:
“She tends to possess a “go with the flow” personality, which, coming from a supervisor point of view, is great to have on the team, but for her own professional development I would like to see her take more ownership of certain things”.
It just LOOKS wrong, with all the commas, etc and I feel like it’s structure needs some help. I’m open to anything, HELP MUH!