I’m trying to adapt a little short story I have written last year into a comic book script and I wonder if could ask for a little feedback (My first language is Italian, so any recommandation about my english would be great).
Here’s the link and the synopsis.
Tag Line: ‘‘Beethoven meets Misery meets Fight Club’’.
Synopsis: One night, a man accidentally hits a pug with his car and his life changes completely, among heartbroken owners, Werewolves-pugs, nasty transformation and fight clubs.
List of characters:
John Doe/Fluffers: The main character of our story. The average man whose life will change in the moment the pug he accidentally killed bites him.
The Owner: Fluffer’s owner. He would do anything to keep his dog with him in the safety of his house.
Jerôme: A black french bulldog. He’s the main champion of the fight club. His main weapon is a harmonica which shoots poisoned darts.
Fluffers, Act I (Issue 1 of 4)