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And that piqued my interest all the more. Nice Work!
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And that piqued my interest all the more. Nice Work!


it was all Val my artist :)
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i've re-lettered this bad biy so if you guys can check it again for me and let me know if you notice any mistake taht would be fantastic! Posted Image
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i've re-lettered this bad biy so if you guys can check it again for me and let me know if you notice any mistake taht would be fantastic! Posted Image

that would be the first one.
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He says "got right in" instead of "go right in" on page 4, and "to close" instead of "too close" on the last page. And there's a few commas missing here and there. Otherwise fine.
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He says "got right in" instead of "go right in" on page 4, and "to close" instead of "too close" on the last page. And there's a few commas missing here and there. Otherwise fine.


Cheers buddy
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I loved this! You can count on my custom when it reaches print.
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I loved this! You can count on my custom when it reaches print.

Gordon, such a lovely comment, thanks!

that would be the first one

oh you git! Posted Image
dont you have a filme poster to copy! Posted Image
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oh you git! :biggrin:
dont you have a filme poster to copy! ;)

ow man, low blow!
And I did it all for you!
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That was sweet. Great character design, intriguing story - MOAR PLEASE.

Agree the cover needs work though. A nice painted portrait of your lead would do wonders.
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That was sweet. Great character design, intriguing story - MOAR PLEASE.


that's great thanks buddy, appreciate the nice comments.

Val had another crack at a cover.
its below and I'd love to hear what you guys think of it.

new infraction cover.jpg
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Very nice! That's awesome, you can't tell he's a cop but it definitely fits the tone of the book more (from what I've seen of it at least).

Actually, screw him not looking like a cop that's what blurbs are for. You could put a section of the old cover above it like the back of the Superior issues.

So my ammended statement is: THIS ROCKS TITS!
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THIS ROCKS TITS!


cool i'm glad you like it :)
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Love the new cover image, but I think the design needs a little work. The concept behind the logo is good, but the tall, condensed font used in the credits makes the cover look a little cheaper than the comic deserves. Also, the way the image cuts off at the top is a little abrupt, as it doesn't match the frame (like at the bottom) so that might be worth looking at?
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Love the new cover image, but I think the design needs a little work.


Hey Brad, cheers for having a look and for the constructive comments.
I see what you mean about the top and the font.
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Bloody nice cover, though I would make the eye person bigger to create more contrast, otherwise every body has the same weight on the page.
See Reverend Johnsons ramble on Green Arrow for what I mean.
http://3.bp.blogspot...0/oct110219.jpg


Btw. who's this Mutt Garvey?
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Btw. who's this Mutt Garvey?


one hell of a talented writer! Posted Image
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Btw. who's this Mutt Garvey?



one hell of a talented writer! Posted Image


Ah so it's not that 'Matt' fella? Can't stand the prick.







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Ah so it's not that 'Matt' fella? Can't stand the prick.


HA BLOODY HA!!!!

That did actually make me giggle! Posted Image
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new page one!

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