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Samir Simão

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Hi guys,

My name is Samir, and like much people around here, i´m trying my breaking in the comics as a penciller.

I think it would be very interesting to me to have my work judginding by the people who like comics...

So, here are my last sample, please, i´d like to hear the impressions of the people here of my work!

regards,




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It looks good.

Very comic-booky, which I like.

It's not perfect, for instance the Punisher on page two, panel two doesn't look quite right.

But it's still really good, I look forward to seeing more.
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There's some good stuff there.

Take a look at my script thread, http://forums.millar...rds-by-russell/ - I could see you drawing The Happiest Dan Alive
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Hey Samir,

Welcome to the board.
I really like your style.
Its cartoony (in a good way) but aggressive.
i especially like the looming DD on page 3.

The only negative things i can say is that on some of the panels your perspectives are a little off and this is making some of anatomy look a little strange.
But these are minor details and i'm just being picky! Posted Image

But you have posted some Really amazing stuff here and i cannot wait to see what you post next.

Kind regards

Matt
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that looks awesome dude.
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I really like it! Looks like you could use a little more experience, but there's definitely good stuff there! Very nice!!!
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Thanks for all the tips guys, i keep all this in mind in the future....i made this new project trying to apply all the stuff that was talked here.

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That looks very cool.
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Looks nice, man. Kind of reminds me of Batman: The Animated Series, which looks great.

Are you taking commissions or doing collabs? I'm sure I, along with several other writers (including the incredibly proactive Russell who I see beat me to this) would love to know.
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I like it. Very dynamic with a lot of energy.
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Hello Everyone,

thanks Paul, i´m glad you liked...and Kavanagh, yes, i do a lot of comissions...send me a PM with what in are in thinking and needing, ok?

Here´s thePosted Image page 2:
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Thanks Gordon, i´m glad you liked it! i toke a look in your comic, its awesome man! congrats.

Anyway, here is the page 3:

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great art, keep up the good work
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Those pages look pretty cool. Nice work.

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Paul and kevin, thanks for the comments.

Here other pege , wich i just did yesterday:

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Some richly deserved praise, worth every cent, well done :)
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Thaaanks bovy, i,m glad you liked it!

heres another page:

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Who directed the cinematography?
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Bovy, in this pages , the cinematography is mine..you liked? or u think that may be more variations, etc??? tell me what you think!

Rgards and thanks for posting!
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Tell your story through mime. Letters can be added later.

The Raid.

Page 13 : panel 1 poster of a missing child on wall, panel 2 coffee and doughnuts on table, LAPD Most Wanted list in background, Panel 3 stands on its own.


1. SFX (hushed whimpering)
2. I'm gonna dry that moist handshake of yours sicko, Where Is She?!
3. Damn - two of them.

Draw silent movies.

God Bless.

Kevin

Seeing as you asked, try a style of your own. one that's not polished, perfect or just another clone. it's impossible to stand out in the crowd.

Be yourself.

When everone is doing the same thing, trying to be bigger and better than the next you'll never be number one. only by doing your thing your way will you become Untouchable.

Reframe your approach. Then reframe again. Then look at things from a compketely different angle. Listen to people you hate or think stupid. Step out your comfort zone.

Think like Jimi Hendrix. Be bold.


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