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Started by mattgarvey1981 , Feb 02 2012 08:24 PM
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Posted 07 February 2012 - 12:54 PM

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Why don't you put it up on drive-thru before offering it to anyone? It costs nothing. Establishes you as a publisher. Might make you a few quid if you promote it well enough. I'll do a cover for you. (Free) if you are not in any rush. Any sales at all will impress a trad publisher more than nothing will.


i had never heard of drive thru but that's a fantastic idea.
Thanks for the offer to do a cover me me Posted Image
i already have a cover supplied by the lovely Peter Singer, if he ever bloody finishes it! (yeah Peter that was directed at you! Posted Image )
But i'd love to see some of your art too Stephen.
Do you have a Deviant account?
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Posted 07 February 2012 - 02:46 PM

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i already have a cover supplied by the lovely Peter Singer, if he ever bloody finishes it! (yeah Peter that was directed at you! :tongue: )

A wizard is never late Frodo Baggins....
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Posted 07 February 2012 - 04:06 PM

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i had never heard of drive thru but that's a fantastic idea.
Thanks for the offer to do a cover me me Posted Image
i already have a cover supplied by the lovely Peter Singer, if he ever bloody finishes it! (yeah Peter that was directed at you! Posted Image )
But i'd love to see some of your art too Stephen.
Do you have a Deviant account?
If not post a couple on this thread, if you want to.


I be here
http://laibhargaid.deviantart.com/

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Posted 07 February 2012 - 08:01 PM

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You need to be a mature person to view.


it's only a boob what harm can it do! Posted Image
nice stuff.
its nice to see a realistic female form.

A wizard is never late Frodo Baggins....

just cause i got big hairy feet does not mean i'm a hobbit!
i'm 6'2"! Posted Image
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Posted 07 February 2012 - 10:36 PM

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nice stuff.
its nice to see a realistic female form.)

Are you sure you looked in the gallery? No one ever mentions the boobs.
I must be doing something wrong.
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Posted 08 February 2012 - 09:06 AM

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Are you sure you looked in the gallery? No one ever mentions the boobs.
I must be doing something wrong.


i think i looked at the right gallery.
there were some blue comics Posted Image than there were some nudes and the afore mentioned boobs! Posted Image
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Posted 08 February 2012 - 12:33 PM

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Great stuff.


short and to the point, thanks Posted Image
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Posted 08 February 2012 - 10:32 PM

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I like turtles.
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Posted 09 February 2012 - 09:13 AM

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I like turtles.


inspiring as always! Posted Image

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Posted 09 February 2012 - 03:12 PM

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i think i looked at the right gallery.
there were some blue comics Posted Image than there were some nudes and the afore mentioned boobs! Posted Image

Just found it odd that it was the boobs you noticed. Out of the hundreds who have commented, and the thousands who have visited, you are the only one to mention boobs. You have outed yourself.Posted Image
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Posted 09 February 2012 - 03:16 PM

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you are the only one to mention boobs.


i like a nice boob.
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Posted 09 February 2012 - 03:48 PM

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i like a nice boob.

i prefer 2 of them, but then...
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Posted 09 February 2012 - 03:53 PM

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i prefer 2 of them, but then...


beggars cant be choosers
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Posted 09 February 2012 - 04:03 PM

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Posted 19 February 2012 - 03:54 PM

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Very cool Matt. What a twist! Great job. As far as criticism goes, The narrative box at the bottom of panel 6 on page one kind of bothers me. It says. " oh come on. He has a gun and I'm in a hole. You don't stand a chance." my gripe is that I don't like the switching back from "I'm" to "you." I think it should either read,"he has a gun and you're in a hole. You don't stand a chance." Or, " oh come on. He has a gun and I'm in a hole. I don't stand a chance."
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Posted 19 February 2012 - 06:54 PM

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Very cool Matt. What a twist! Great job

Glad you liked the twist! Posted Image
I'd love to know what you think of this one too:

http://forums.millar...ging-the-forum/

The narrative box at the bottom of panel 6 on page one kind of bothers me

That is a fair point i can see why it bothers you and i agree. Posted Image
Thats why you guys are my proof readers Posted Image
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Posted 01 March 2012 - 09:16 PM

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Good work! I like it.
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Posted 02 March 2012 - 09:29 AM

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Good work! I like it.


Cheers buddy, i'm glad you liked it.
i love praise, i do feel my head may get bigger with all these compliments! Posted Image
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Posted 05 March 2012 - 01:51 PM

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I had a very lovely offer from Georg Sonne (OLIVE Posted Image ) to re letter this for me because well lets face it, my lettering sucks!
So a big thank you to George on this:

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Posted 05 March 2012 - 02:49 PM

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Yay!
I´ve already spotted a few typos, but it´s nice to have my credits on a creative post :)
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